This is my groups rough cut of Bee- smile our verision of Lily Allen's-smile.This was what we put together after filming and doing a bit of editting for our music video. We had to ask our teacher for critisims in order to gain feedback to gain a higer grade overall. Some of the critisisms he gave us was;
1. We need to add some varation to our angles for differnet locations.
2. We should consider re-filming our studio shots in order to make it a more professional and visally appealing video to the audience, because it would match the lively narrative. so movement in the studio shots would go with it better rather than the current very stactic ones.
3. we should take out certain basstracks such as the one where bee is walking in a park, which is a basstrack that is seen too many times. The filming is too shakey and doesnt look good, so either we need to change our basstrack or delte it.
4. Lastly the ending where we zoom into the burning picture should be cut as it is too long and isnt a good zoom as zooms are hard to pull off and too look good.
Some things we took from this critisim was to refilm the studio shots in differnet angles with movements in order to get the lively effect overall when we havent finished editting yet its starting to look a lot better.
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